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Title: The Geometry of Grace

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A breath unspools like thread through morning’s loom,

the sky a blue hymn, stitched with wings of sparrows.

We name this grace—the pulse beneath the bruise,

the star that cracks the dark but leaves no arrow.

A cup of steam ascends in cursive swirls,

a psalm the kettle sings to restless palms.

The cat’s slow blink, a liturgy of fur—

these altars wear no gold, no priestly psalm.

The rain arrives, a beggar at the glass,

and leaves the earth a debtor to its kiss.

No hand extends the dawn, yet here it leans,

a gift unsigned, a ledger dismissed.

A stranger’s laugh, a bridge of tangled sound,

connects two islands in the sea of faces.

The wind, a vagrant, borrows every sigh

and spends them freely in the void’s blank spaces.

The moon, a coin flipped by a nameless thumb,

buys back the shadows we’ve misplaced at noon.

The heart, unasked, still drums its stubborn yes

to questions posed in languages unknown.

A child’s chalk trace on concrete, bright and brief,

maps heaven’s edge in pastel hieroglyphs.

The bread we break still carries yeast from suns

that baked their light into the soil’s clenched fist.

The night unpockets stars like loose regrets,

each one a wound, each one a salve. We count

the scars that glow where mercy left its prints,

the arithmetic of loss turned inside out.

The spider spins her silk from gut and air,

a net to catch the fall of every wing.

We, too, are woven into something vast—

a tapestry where thanks is the first string.

The dog’s bark carves a chapel in the dusk,

its echo vaulting past the fence of days.

The tea cools, but the steam still writes its ode

on windows fogged with time’s translucent haze.

So trace the shape joy takes when left unclaimed—

a curve that bows to what it cannot hold.

The thanks we owe the gale, the root, the rain,

is paid in blood, in breath, in bone, in gold.

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Explanation:

**Stanza 1:** Begins with the intimacy of breath and sky, framing grace as both fragile and omnipresent. The “star that cracks the dark but leaves no arrow” introduces cosmic gratitude—beauty without a visible giver.

**Stanza 2:** Mundane acts (steam, a cat’s blink) are elevated to sacred rituals, challenging traditional religious imagery. The absence of “gold” or “psalm” suggests divinity in the ordinary.

**Stanza 3:** Rain symbolizes unasked-for generosity. Dawn as a “gift unsigned” questions human ownership of blessings, hinting at an anonymous divine source.

**Stanza 4:** Human connection and nature’s chaos (wind, laughter) are portrayed as collaborative acts of grace, blurring boundaries between giver and receiver.

**Stanza 5:** Celestial imagery (moon, heartbeats) explores gratitude for life’s involuntary persistence. The “stubborn yes” mirrors faith in unseen forces.

**Stanza 6:** Transient beauty (chalk drawings, bread) ties creation to cosmic cycles, implying gratitude for ephemeral yet recurring gifts.

**Stanza 7:** Night and stars juxtapose pain and healing, framing gratitude as acceptance of duality—scars as “arithmetic of loss turned inside out.”

**Stanza 8:** The spider’s web becomes a metaphor for interconnectedness. “Thanks is the first string” positions gratitude as foundational to existence.

**Stanza 9:** A dog’s bark and cooling tea evoke fleeting moments imbued with eternal resonance. Time’s “haze” suggests gratitude transcends temporal limits.

**Stanza 10:** Concludes with the body (“blood, breath, bone”) as currency for cosmic debt. The “curve that bows” embodies humility before life’s ungraspable grace.

The poem interlaces domestic and cosmic imagery, echoing themes of anonymous divinity and gratitude as an act of participation in an unbounded, sacred order.

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